2000 pts night lords competitive

++ Unbound Army (Faction) (Chaos - FW Heretic Astartes) [48 PL, 951pts] ++

+ Elites +

Hellforged Contemptor Dreadnought [10 PL, 203pts]
. Left Arm: Combi-bolter, Hellforged deathclaw
. Right Arm: Butcher cannon

+ Flyer +

Chaos Fire Raptor Assault Gunship [19 PL, 374pts]: Hellstrike missiles
. Reaper batteries: 2x Reaper battery

Chaos Fire Raptor Assault Gunship [19 PL, 374pts]: Hellstrike missiles
. Reaper batteries: 2x Reaper battery

++ Battalion Detachment +3CP (Chaos - Chaos Space Marines) [62 PL, 1045pts] ++

+ No Force Org Slot +

Legion: Night Lords

+ HQ +

Chaos Lord on Bike [7 PL, 127pts]: Claws of the Black Hunt, Combi-bolter, 2x Lightning Claw, No Chaos Mark

Dark Apostle [5 PL, 76pts]: Bolt pistol, No Chaos Mark, Power maul, The Black Mace

+ Troops +

Chaos Space Marines [5 PL, 78pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Boltgun, Chainsword
. 3x Marine w/ Boltgun
. Marine w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Chaos Space Marines [5 PL, 78pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Boltgun, Chainsword
. 3x Marine w/ Boltgun
. Marine w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Chaos Space Marines [5 PL, 78pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. 3x Marine w/ Boltgun
. Marine w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

+ Elites +

Chaos Terminators [14 PL, 190pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Chaos Terminator Champion: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe

+ Fast Attack +

Chaos Bikers [9 PL, 169pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Plasma gun
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Plasma gun
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Combi-bolter
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Combi-bolter
. Chaos Biker Champion: Combi-bolter, Power fist

+ Dedicated Transport +

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 83pts]: Combi-bolter, Havoc launcher, No Chaos Mark

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 83pts]: Combi-bolter, Havoc launcher, No Chaos Mark

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 83pts]: Combi-bolter, Havoc launcher, No Chaos Mark

++ Total: [110 PL, 1996pts] ++

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Will someone critique my list :-(

Yeah OK. You say the list is 'competitive' and you say it is 'unbound' at the top. Most tournaments require battleforged not unbound.

Also in terms of competitiveness I don't rate the points to damage output of the fire raptors. Also the chaos contemptor is not as good as the decimators. Only 15 models of troops isn't enough for me and taking 15% of your points on rhinos seems a trifle excessive. The terminators could do with combi plasma or melta for first strike output.

Hope this helps.

++ Battalion Detachment +3CP (Chaos - Chaos Space Marines) [69 PL, 1173pts] ++

+ No Force Org Slot +

Legion: Night Lords

+ HQ +

Chaos Lord on Bike [7 PL, 127pts]: Claws of the Black Hunt, Combi-bolter, 2x Lightning Claw, No Chaos Mark

Dark Apostle [5 PL, 76pts]: Bolt pistol, No Chaos Mark, Power maul, The Black Mace

+ Troops +

Chaos Space Marines [5 PL, 78pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. 3x Marine w/ Boltgun
. Marine w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Chaos Space Marines [5 PL, 78pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. 3x Marine w/ Boltgun
. Marine w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Chaos Space Marines [5 PL, 78pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. 3x Marine w/ Boltgun
. Marine w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

+ Fast Attack +

Chaos Bikers [9 PL, 169pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Plasma gun
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Plasma gun
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Combi-bolter
. Chaos Biker: Chainsword, Combi-bolter
. Chaos Biker Champion: Combi-bolter, Power fist

+ Heavy Support +

Havocs [7 PL, 117pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Havocs [7 PL, 117pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Havocs [7 PL, 117pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Aspiring Champion: Bolt pistol, Boltgun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun
. Havoc w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

+ Dedicated Transport +

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 72pts]: Combi-bolter, No Chaos Mark

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 72pts]: Combi-bolter, No Chaos Mark

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 72pts]: Combi-bolter, No Chaos Mark

++ Vanguard Detachment +1CP (Chaos - Chaos Space Marines) [50 PL, 763pts] ++

+ No Force Org Slot +

Legion: Night Lords

+ HQ +

Sorcerer in Terminator Armour [8 PL, 154pts]: Combi-bolter, Force sword, No Chaos Mark, Prescience, Warptime

+ Elites +

Chaos Terminators [14 PL, 203pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Chaos Terminator Champion: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator w/ Heavy Weapon: Power axe, Reaper autocannon

Chaos Terminators [14 PL, 203pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Chaos Terminator Champion: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator w/ Heavy Weapon: Power axe, Reaper autocannon

Chaos Terminators [14 PL, 203pts]: No Chaos Mark
. Chaos Terminator Champion: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power axe
. Terminator w/ Heavy Weapon: Power axe, Reaper autocannon

++ Total: [119 PL, 1936pts] ++

The havocs will be in the rhinos with the csm squads. My terminators will all begin in deepstrike. I did not give my terminators combi plasma is because I wanter to keep there squads cheap, but i threw in a reaper autocannon just to see how it performs. I think your desired result was mpre boota on the ground and i have definitely added to that.

This certainly strikes me as more competitive, you'd need to play this aggressive though. Are you throwing the Havocs forward in Rhinos and letting the CSM footslog or hold objectives in the rear?

Since you can opt to have 2 squads in a rhino i would put a 5 man csm squad and a 5 man havoc squad in one rhino. I will deepstrike all of the terminators onto e
The battlefield.