Originally Posted by
wittdooley
I dunno. I think the Salamanders have been fairly well established as a protector of the people. They do nearly come to blows with the Black Templars during the 3rd War for Armageddon, as you can read about in Helsreach.
Further, if they really did believe in the "Emperor's one true purpose," there is no way they'd be working with the Tau, as you suggest they do. No way. The Emperor was all about cleansing and burning in the name of humanity.
I agree with Dagonis about the Ad Mech, too. So.... this Ad Mech faction has rediscovered the secrets of the gene seed AND plasma tech? And the entirety of the Imperium isn't standing at their door? Really? I'm sure the Blood Angels and Raven Guard would gladly accept some gene-seed assistance.
I love that you're trying to create your own fluff; it's one of my favorite parts of the hobby. However, if you're going to, you can't just skirt the whole of the 40k canon to do so and want it to be legitimate and/or believable.
Also, I'd work on your usage of 'whilst.' In the great words of Inigo Montoya, "You keep using this word. I do not think it means what you think it means."