wow, I really didnt expect this many replies and especially not so soon. I really appreciate the encouragement..as it helps me get off my *** and do stuff !

I appreciate the constructive crit with the eyes too, ill likely high-light them then add some GW water-effects to make them shiny.

@Magos Bellum,

glad you dig the fluff, I made a point of adding 50% defeats as I often find alot of fan-fluff can be "mary-sueish" and I think weakness is just as important as strength, and one without the other is IMO quite boring too.