Originally Posted by
Silversurfer
I'm not sure you can put 2 doctrines on veterans (at least, it's clear in the french codex ...), so check your codex and I guess you will spare some points ...
There are a lot of points sinks and Tallarn told you about some of them. But I would add :
_ bodyguards
_ medics
_ powerfists (as said Tallarn)
_ heavy bolters on valkyries (as if you want to move fast, it will prevent to fire them)
I would tell you also to consider replacing 2 valkyries with 2 vendettas and meltas in 1 veteran squad with plasma guns.
I'm also not sure Straken is a valuable choice in such a list.
With all those points spared, you could think about plasma pistols for some of your vet sarges and some deepstriking or snaking stormtroopers.